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		<title>By: The Mossy Skull &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Turned on My Head</title>
		<link>http://windupstories.com/2007/03/14/futurizing/comment-page-1/#comment-1783</link>
		<dc:creator>The Mossy Skull &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Turned on My Head</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Mar 2007 21:43:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] came across this post from Paolo Bacigalupi&#8217;s weblog (who I am more and more inclined to respect as both a writer [...]</description>
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		<title>By: &#187; Links for 20-03-2007 &#187; Velcro City Tourist Board &#187; Blog Archive</title>
		<link>http://windupstories.com/2007/03/14/futurizing/comment-page-1/#comment-1171</link>
		<dc:creator>&#187; Links for 20-03-2007 &#187; Velcro City Tourist Board &#187; Blog Archive</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Mar 2007 03:27:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] - Futurizing &#8220;The process of adding kick-ass gadgets, tools, and extrapolations to a sci-fi story to make [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Lou Anders</title>
		<link>http://windupstories.com/2007/03/14/futurizing/comment-page-1/#comment-1120</link>
		<dc:creator>Lou Anders</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 19 Mar 2007 19:47:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>China&#039;s response, when I compared him to the writer of MOBY DICK: 

&quot;People have compared me to Melville before, which, of course, is monumental praise, and thereâ€™s is the name thing. Turn my â€œiâ€ into an â€œlâ€ and change the place and we have the same name. Iâ€™m glad you think the values coexist. Several of the people on that symposium have said, â€œLook I admire your work, but youâ€™re pulled in a pulp direction as a storyteller, and youâ€™re also pulled in a more avant-garde â€˜literary direction,â€™ and these are fundamentally pulling against each other.â€ I find that as a charge very interesting, and Iâ€™m not sure that I agree with it. I feel very confused about it, but it does seem to me to be a very interesting take. This has given me pause for thought. But I do retain this hope that you can actually have it both ways. And if you can have it both ways at all, fantasy is a uniquely powerful arena that would allow you to do that. So my aim would be precisely to write the ripping yarn that is also sociologically serious and stylistically avant-garde. I mean, that&#039;s the Holy Grail right there!&quot;

Meanwhile, see the latest Asimov&#039;s &quot;On Books&quot; for a ver y interesting take on INFOQUAKE that dovetails with this discussion: 
http://www.asimovs.com/_issue_0704/onbooks.shtml</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>China&#8217;s response, when I compared him to the writer of MOBY DICK: </p>
<p>&#8220;People have compared me to Melville before, which, of course, is monumental praise, and thereâ€™s is the name thing. Turn my â€œiâ€ into an â€œlâ€ and change the place and we have the same name. Iâ€™m glad you think the values coexist. Several of the people on that symposium have said, â€œLook I admire your work, but youâ€™re pulled in a pulp direction as a storyteller, and youâ€™re also pulled in a more avant-garde â€˜literary direction,â€™ and these are fundamentally pulling against each other.â€ I find that as a charge very interesting, and Iâ€™m not sure that I agree with it. I feel very confused about it, but it does seem to me to be a very interesting take. This has given me pause for thought. But I do retain this hope that you can actually have it both ways. And if you can have it both ways at all, fantasy is a uniquely powerful arena that would allow you to do that. So my aim would be precisely to write the ripping yarn that is also sociologically serious and stylistically avant-garde. I mean, that&#8217;s the Holy Grail right there!&#8221;</p>
<p>Meanwhile, see the latest Asimov&#8217;s &#8220;On Books&#8221; for a ver y interesting take on INFOQUAKE that dovetails with this discussion:<br />
<a href="http://www.asimovs.com/_issue_0704/onbooks.shtml" rel="nofollow">http://www.asimovs.com/_issue_0704/onbooks.shtml</a></p>
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		<title>By: Evan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Evan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 16 Mar 2007 16:48:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m not sure how much of it is necessary.  It&#039;s a deeply political novel, for all of its horror elements, so a lot of it is relevant, because it&#039;s in his interest to build up the situation that underlies the narrative via presenting the political and socioeconomic factors in the city with a good level of detail.  But there are times when he slips and goes into tour guide mode, and even when working in service to the plot, he&#039;s little concerned with economy of description.  That said, those times don&#039;t predominate, and the whole of the setting is densely realized.  Mieville seems to have a cabbie&#039;s knowledge of his locales.  He&#039;s just pointing stuff out to you as you go past it, sometimes relevant, sometimes not, but always interesting, and generally hinting at what a staggering amount of stuff he could tell you, if you needed him to carry you somewhere else.

The primary problem with this is that he tends to invest almost every place the novel takes you with the same level of detail, whether it&#039;s necessary or not.  This has an impact on the overall pacing.  Still, it&#039;s quite a worthwhile read, even if you come to conclude that it&#039;s still speaking inward.

Speaking of inturning, if you ever get the time, I&#039;d be interested to hear what you make of John Clute&#039;s APPLESEED.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m not sure how much of it is necessary.  It&#8217;s a deeply political novel, for all of its horror elements, so a lot of it is relevant, because it&#8217;s in his interest to build up the situation that underlies the narrative via presenting the political and socioeconomic factors in the city with a good level of detail.  But there are times when he slips and goes into tour guide mode, and even when working in service to the plot, he&#8217;s little concerned with economy of description.  That said, those times don&#8217;t predominate, and the whole of the setting is densely realized.  Mieville seems to have a cabbie&#8217;s knowledge of his locales.  He&#8217;s just pointing stuff out to you as you go past it, sometimes relevant, sometimes not, but always interesting, and generally hinting at what a staggering amount of stuff he could tell you, if you needed him to carry you somewhere else.</p>
<p>The primary problem with this is that he tends to invest almost every place the novel takes you with the same level of detail, whether it&#8217;s necessary or not.  This has an impact on the overall pacing.  Still, it&#8217;s quite a worthwhile read, even if you come to conclude that it&#8217;s still speaking inward.</p>
<p>Speaking of inturning, if you ever get the time, I&#8217;d be interested to hear what you make of John Clute&#8217;s APPLESEED.</p>
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		<title>By: Paolo</title>
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		<dc:creator>Paolo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 16 Mar 2007 00:29:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Shara, I would never warn anyone about any author. One person&#039;s sins are another person&#039;s fetish, after all. :-)

Lou, if you love Perdido for its exhaustive world-building, I think you&#039;re crazy. If you love it for its *necessary* world-building, then I&#039;ll still try to read the thing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Shara, I would never warn anyone about any author. One person&#8217;s sins are another person&#8217;s fetish, after all. :-)</p>
<p>Lou, if you love Perdido for its exhaustive world-building, I think you&#8217;re crazy. If you love it for its *necessary* world-building, then I&#8217;ll still try to read the thing.</p>
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		<title>By: Lou Anders</title>
		<link>http://windupstories.com/2007/03/14/futurizing/comment-page-1/#comment-764</link>
		<dc:creator>Lou Anders</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Mar 2007 21:53:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That being said, I love Perdido Street Station because of its exhaustive world-building, and for the same reason I loved Tolkien as a child. I disagree with Harrison even as I agree with Paolo (and I think there&#039;s room enough between the two that I can do that), and what I hate about Star Wars and latter-day Star Trek - for instance - is not the magnificent world-building - and it is magnificent - but that the world-building there isn&#039;t put into service of something grander and more meaningful. Again, I hold up John Meaney&#039;s Nulapeiron Sequence as a brilliant example of world-building in the service of narrative, not in place of it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That being said, I love Perdido Street Station because of its exhaustive world-building, and for the same reason I loved Tolkien as a child. I disagree with Harrison even as I agree with Paolo (and I think there&#8217;s room enough between the two that I can do that), and what I hate about Star Wars and latter-day Star Trek &#8211; for instance &#8211; is not the magnificent world-building &#8211; and it is magnificent &#8211; but that the world-building there isn&#8217;t put into service of something grander and more meaningful. Again, I hold up John Meaney&#8217;s Nulapeiron Sequence as a brilliant example of world-building in the service of narrative, not in place of it.</p>
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		<title>By: Shara Saunsaucie</title>
		<link>http://windupstories.com/2007/03/14/futurizing/comment-page-1/#comment-707</link>
		<dc:creator>Shara Saunsaucie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Mar 2007 10:59:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Paolo, I have to agree with you on this. It&#039;s interesting to see your take on Harrison&#039;s post too, cause I know that raised a huge stink among fantasy readers, especially those of epic fantasy. Like you, I saw the parallels to SF myself, but hey, everyone brings something different to the plate. :)

Can&#039;t blame you for keeping the author to yourself. But if said author offends again, I do hope you&#039;ll warn those of us who prefer to stay &lt;i&gt;away&lt;/i&gt; from that kind of SF.

Lou: I never have a problem with minimal, if any, SF window dressing in futuristic worlds. In &lt;i&gt;Children of Men&lt;/i&gt;, their computers were futuristic enough for me, and the premise is enough to remind us that on the brink of extinction, we aren&#039;t exactly going to be making grand technological progress, except (in this case) in the research of fertilization.

Of course, P.D. James is a mystery writer, and the original book has even less SF in it than the movie, so that may be part of it too. BUT: I am not the kind of reader who minds. I&#039;m too easily overwhelmed with futurizing, and often, I don&#039;t buy the future that&#039;s being handed to me or I view it more as &quot;fantasy&quot; than actual SF, no matter how plausible it might really be.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Paolo, I have to agree with you on this. It&#8217;s interesting to see your take on Harrison&#8217;s post too, cause I know that raised a huge stink among fantasy readers, especially those of epic fantasy. Like you, I saw the parallels to SF myself, but hey, everyone brings something different to the plate. :)</p>
<p>Can&#8217;t blame you for keeping the author to yourself. But if said author offends again, I do hope you&#8217;ll warn those of us who prefer to stay <i>away</i> from that kind of SF.</p>
<p>Lou: I never have a problem with minimal, if any, SF window dressing in futuristic worlds. In <i>Children of Men</i>, their computers were futuristic enough for me, and the premise is enough to remind us that on the brink of extinction, we aren&#8217;t exactly going to be making grand technological progress, except (in this case) in the research of fertilization.</p>
<p>Of course, P.D. James is a mystery writer, and the original book has even less SF in it than the movie, so that may be part of it too. BUT: I am not the kind of reader who minds. I&#8217;m too easily overwhelmed with futurizing, and often, I don&#8217;t buy the future that&#8217;s being handed to me or I view it more as &#8220;fantasy&#8221; than actual SF, no matter how plausible it might really be.</p>
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		<title>By: Paolo</title>
		<link>http://windupstories.com/2007/03/14/futurizing/comment-page-1/#comment-673</link>
		<dc:creator>Paolo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Mar 2007 04:50:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lou and Shara, I think I&#039;m going to keep the author to myself. I want to finish the book and see if he pulls anything out of his hat. 

Evan, I read the Mike Harrison piece. Yes, this is definitely related to what I&#039;m concerned with. This is interesting:

&quot;Above all, worldbuilding is not technically neccessary. It is the great clomping foot of nerdism. It is the attempt to exhaustively survey a place that isnâ€™t there. &lt;em&gt;A good writer would never try to do that, even with a place that&lt;/em&gt; is &lt;em&gt;there.&quot;&lt;/em&gt; (emphasis my own)

Harrison really seems to be touching on the finesse of writing well. I agree with his thoughts, but the thing that really fascinates me about world-building in sf right now, is the idea that sf may -- because it&#039;s so obsessed with futurizing -- be speaking to its navel. 

The complaint is raised often enough that SF is ignored as a literature, and I can&#039;t help wondering if its because we&#039;re failing to lift our heads and speak outward. 

We can point to lots of stories that steal sf tropes, without acknowledging their origin.  And we can all say, &quot;Well, that&#039;s really sf.&quot; 

But I think outside readers know the difference. They know when we&#039;re talking to our in crowd and flashing signs to each other instead of actually trying to communicate with them and I think our obsession with, as Darryl put it, &quot;The Mutually Assured Destruction scenario&quot; of trying to construct the coolest future furniture is a big part of this. We&#039;re building some mighty high walls to scale if we actually want anyone to visit our playpen.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lou and Shara, I think I&#8217;m going to keep the author to myself. I want to finish the book and see if he pulls anything out of his hat. </p>
<p>Evan, I read the Mike Harrison piece. Yes, this is definitely related to what I&#8217;m concerned with. This is interesting:</p>
<p>&#8220;Above all, worldbuilding is not technically neccessary. It is the great clomping foot of nerdism. It is the attempt to exhaustively survey a place that isnâ€™t there. <em>A good writer would never try to do that, even with a place that</em> is <em>there.&#8221;</em> (emphasis my own)</p>
<p>Harrison really seems to be touching on the finesse of writing well. I agree with his thoughts, but the thing that really fascinates me about world-building in sf right now, is the idea that sf may &#8212; because it&#8217;s so obsessed with futurizing &#8212; be speaking to its navel. </p>
<p>The complaint is raised often enough that SF is ignored as a literature, and I can&#8217;t help wondering if its because we&#8217;re failing to lift our heads and speak outward. </p>
<p>We can point to lots of stories that steal sf tropes, without acknowledging their origin.  And we can all say, &#8220;Well, that&#8217;s really sf.&#8221; </p>
<p>But I think outside readers know the difference. They know when we&#8217;re talking to our in crowd and flashing signs to each other instead of actually trying to communicate with them and I think our obsession with, as Darryl put it, &#8220;The Mutually Assured Destruction scenario&#8221; of trying to construct the coolest future furniture is a big part of this. We&#8217;re building some mighty high walls to scale if we actually want anyone to visit our playpen.</p>
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		<title>By: Derryl Murphy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Derryl Murphy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Mar 2007 04:08:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yeah, Lou. My explanation to my wife was that, indeed, there may be such a background, but we don&#039;t have to hear about it; it wasn&#039;t central to the story we were busy watching. Didn&#039;t seem to satisfy her, though.

Forgot about Walter&#039;s story. It is a good example of that.

D</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yeah, Lou. My explanation to my wife was that, indeed, there may be such a background, but we don&#8217;t have to hear about it; it wasn&#8217;t central to the story we were busy watching. Didn&#8217;t seem to satisfy her, though.</p>
<p>Forgot about Walter&#8217;s story. It is a good example of that.</p>
<p>D</p>
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		<title>By: Lou Anders</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lou Anders</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Mar 2007 03:29:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Derryl - my own wife also wondered that the future depicted in Children of Men hadn&#039;t advanced significantly past where we were today. Some of these problems (if they are problems, and I think not as I read both films as allegory) occur in GATTACA, because they show a film where one can extrapolate anything from DNA but can&#039;t seem to do anything about it. Love that film too though.

I would cite Walter Jon Williams&#039; brilliant &quot;The Green Leopard Plague&quot; as a story that has layer upon layer of cool SFnal extrapolations in full support of story. I am wondering about the book that Paolo is reading too and have some possible candidates I&#039;ll keep to myself.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Derryl &#8211; my own wife also wondered that the future depicted in Children of Men hadn&#8217;t advanced significantly past where we were today. Some of these problems (if they are problems, and I think not as I read both films as allegory) occur in GATTACA, because they show a film where one can extrapolate anything from DNA but can&#8217;t seem to do anything about it. Love that film too though.</p>
<p>I would cite Walter Jon Williams&#8217; brilliant &#8220;The Green Leopard Plague&#8221; as a story that has layer upon layer of cool SFnal extrapolations in full support of story. I am wondering about the book that Paolo is reading too and have some possible candidates I&#8217;ll keep to myself.</p>
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